Wednesday 29 July 2015

The Huge Wave
The ultra marine wave is caving in on me like an ancient scroll. The vociferous, thunderous wave is crashing down making my ears ring. I can see the lip of the wave in front of me like shattered glass and the white caps dancing on the horizon.

The suns bright rays reflect off the azure water which shimmers in my eyes. The barrel of the wave comes in on me like an avalanche and it wraps around me in a big bear hug. The salty sea air sprays my past my face giving me the taste of the disgusting salty sea.

 I get a shiver up my spine as the frigid water crashes down from the barrel and drenches my body. I can see the light at the end of the tunnel. I plough through the pipe fast like a cheetah. I fire out of the rolled up scroll. slowly I sink back into the water watching the next wave rise majestically out of the teal ocean and it beckons me towards it.

Thursday 23 July 2015

The snowy mountain descriptive writing

Mountain hiking
The milky white clouds floating in the howling wind match the chalky white color of the snow, scattered all over the colossal mountain. The forceful wind is blowing a gale like a hurricane providing us with an intrepid journey ahead.


The jagged rocks are like sharp knifes piercing my feet through my thick leather boots. I am staggering up the vast mountain through the overruling wind that is gently brushing past my face. 

The crystallized snow is shimmering in the suns fluorescent rays. I peer behind me waiting patiently for my mates. I trudge up the bleached landscape staring at my cloud like breath as I take in lots of air with exhaustion. The frigid conditions are as cold as the icy sea of the Antarctic.

 My back is weighing me down and it feels like I'm carrying a ton of weight draining my body of energy. The summit is now within reach and its majestic icy peak beckons me forward.